Strongest and Weakest Paragraphs

I'd say that my strongest paragraphs were my body paragraphs because they flowed a lot better than my introduction. I also feel like I knew what I wanted to talk about, and I did well on elaborating on the topics of each. However, I feel like they still need to be reviewed by a couple other people considering that I missed the group activity. Overall, I feel somewhat satisfied on my body paragraphs.

For the weakest paragraph I'd have to go with my introduction because it was just so unorganized. Considering that I only had 45-50 minutes in class to type of an essay I felt like I was under pressure, so I was not able to point out what I wanted to talk about exactly. So that kind of was a downfall for the opening of my essay. With that said, I will have at least two people revise my essay to get feedback so I can edit it.