1. Honestly, from the start I knew that the effort that I put into the essay was not enough to get a satisfying grade so, I'm not surprised at any of the comments.
2. The comments that I find most helpful are the questions that Susie asks. It helps me ponder a little more on the topic and that helps me add on to the essay.
3. I found all the comments helpful because they will help me prepare for what needs to be included on the next essay.
4. Based off the comments the one part of the essay rubric that I think needs more focus is my introduction. I've noticed that I lack of a strong thesis, and that's the most important part of an essay.
5. If I were to grade my essay based off the effort that I put in I would give myself a C. I believe my final draft improved a whole lot from the rough draft. In my rough draft I lacked of a thesis, but one was included it in my final draft and it was a "good thesis" according to Susie, which is good. However, what I did to make sure that my final draft was better was simply devote much more time and effort.
6. What I will do to ensure that I do a lot better on my next essay will be to prioritize my time and devote as much time needed to make my essay meet all of the requirements.
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