Did your peers guess your thesis correctly? Yes
Did you peers believe your thesis is an arguable one? Yes
What, if any, revisions do you think you need to make to your thesis based upon the annotations and comments your peers made?
-I feel I don't need to make any revisions to my thesis because I mention my claims and they are all arguable.
Choose TWO comments from your peers that you believe are the most helpful to you. Then explain how you will use these comments to help you revise your essay. Indicate the name of the person who made that comment in parenthesis.
Comment 1: Natalie Orozco
Your response: Natalie shared a couple ideas that I should use to elaborate further on one of my claims. I will most certainly take it into consideration.
Comment 2: Zeenat Alli
Your response: Zeenat suggested to elaborate further in my intro for the "they say" part. I will take that into consideration.
Are there any other important ideas you have about how you can improve your essay?
- Not for now.
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